Friday, 31 July 2015

An All-Ages Harley Quinn Comic!

Hi Everyone,

I have been practicing my writing recently and on a plane trip to Florida I saw the perfect opportunity to do just that.

When I was little I watched the Batman Adventures cartoons on TV and I fell in love with Harley Quinn! Today, Harley is incredibly popular and has her own ongoing series. Sometimes this series can be a little bit mature and seeing as the Suicide Squad is defiantly inappropriate for the youngest of readers, I thought it would be fun to write a Harley Quinn comic for kids! Something that little Ellie would have enjoyed! :)

Below is a 22 page transcript for what would be #1. After a date night with the Joker goes horribly wrong, Harley returns home alone to find that her two hyenas, Bud and Lou, have been kidnapped. Harley's quest to find them takes her all over Gotham, to Ivy's nursery for plants, Catwoman's 'purrfect' mansion, Scarecrow's cornfield, the Iceburg Lounge and Two-Face's abandoned election hall!

Please check out #2 here.
Please check out #3 here.


Page 1
 
1 – Batman on roof top, looking over the streets of Gotham.
In Caption: In a city called Gotham a Dark Knight stalks the streets.

2 – Batman gliding down towards Harley and Joker who are throwing cupcake bombs at the people of Gotham.
In Caption: This caped crusader, also known as Batman, put himself in charge of taking care of all the shenanigans that people like me get up to.
 
3 – Zoom in on Harley doing this.
In Caption: As in me, Harleen Quinzel. Jazz up my name a bit and you get Harley Quinn, the most beautiful, most agile, most awesome jester in town.
 
4 – Zoom in on Joker who is right next to Harley.
In Caption: Well, other than Mr J of course. My Joker is always trying to put a smile on ol’B-man’s face but it never works, he’s just too grumpy. Not everyone can see how funny my puddin’ is.
 
5 – A sad Joker sitting in Batmobile waving good-bye to Harley Quinn. Batman is about to take him back to Arkham Asylum.
In Caption: It’s a shame that Mr J and I can never have a date that doesn’t end in Batman taking him back to Arkham Asylum.  
 

Page 2

Harley returning home after an unsuccessful date night. She wants to keep busy all by herself but isn’t quite sure what to do.

1 – A sad Harley walking home to an abandoned funfair. The sun is rising and a new day in Gotham is here.
Harley in thought: Until my puddin’ comes home I’m gonna have to look after our little love nest all by lonesome.
2 – Harley looking around.
Harley in thought: I’ll get this place all cleaned up ready for my Joker’s great return. Knowing my puddin', he'll be out of Arkham in no time.
3 – Harley imagining herself doing housework. Not happy.
Harley in thought: I can’t really imagine me dusting an’ hoovering though. If I wanna be the Cinderella of the Gotham underworld I wanna be the princess version, not the maid!
SFX: Bleh!
4 – Harley wondering.
Harley: Hmm what else can I do?
5 – Harley having a lightbulb idea moment.
Harley: I know! I’ll feed the babies!

Page 3
Harley goes to feed her two hyenas but they are nowhere to be found. She finds a note revealing that someone has taken her pets.
1 – Harley searching for her hyenas.
Harley: Babies?
2 – Harley looking under a black and red diamond rug.
Harley in thought: Where are my fluffy friends hiding?
3 – Harley calling up a staircase.
Harley: Hellloooo?
4 – Harley still searching.
Harley: Bud, Lou, where are you?
5 – Harley spots a note and the panel showcases what the letter says. She reads it and you can see her red and black glove on either side of the page.
The note: Your two hyenas are with me now. Blame the coin.  
6 – Harley standing with the note.
Harley in thought: What’s that suppose’ to mean? Who could have done this?

 
Page 4
Harley runs into Poison Ivy’s plant nursery which is found within Ivy’s greenhouse. This is where Poison Ivy cares for lots of living plants which play with toys, cry and act just like human babies.
1 – Harley runs in door with note in hand. Full view of the nursery, plants are playing and Ivy is their supervisor.
Harley: Red! Red! Someone has stolen my babies. My poor little hyenas are out in this world all by their lonesome. They’re probably cold an’ scared an’ missing their mummy.
Poison Ivy: Oh Harl’, don't be so dramatic. Are you sure they’ve been stolen? They might have just taken themselves for a walk or something.
2 – Harley shows Ivy the note. Ivy adoring a plant.
Harley: Look, I found this note. It says somthin’ about a coin.
Ivy: I’m sorry girl but I don’t have time to look right now. I’ve got my own babies to look after.
3 – Harley looking sad, pleading with Ivy.
Harley: Please have a look. Please, please, please with a cherry on top.
Ivy: Fine, I’ll take a quick –
SFX: CRASH!
4 – A potted baby plant has accidentally jumped on and squashed another baby plant.
SFX over plants: Cries.
5 – Ivy turning her back on Harley to go help the plants.
Poison Ivy: Oh great, Lily has accidentally squashed Timmy again. I knew those plant pots were too heavy. I’m sorry Harl’ but I can’t help you out with this one.
Harley: Yeah, okay red. I understand.

 
Pages 5-6
Harley goes knocking at Catwoman’s door but she is just as unhelpful as Poison Ivy.
1 – Harley knocking on a purple door which has a silver cat decoration on.
Harley: Hello? Are you in there, kitty?
SFX: Knock, knock, knock.
2 – Catwoman opens the door.
Catwoman: Harley?
3 – Harley gives Catwoman a big hug.
Harley: Eek! Long-time no see, kitty!
Catwoman: Come inside, Quinn.
4 – Harley following Catwoman inside. Posh house with cats everywhere.
Catwoman: What brings you to my own little purrfect palace?
Harley: Well I have just been to see Ivy and –
5 – Catwoman dismissing Ivy. Those two don’t really get along.
Catwoman: How is that plant obsessed crazy lady doing?
Harley: Pretty good, she’s still running the nursery.
6 – Catwoman continuing the discussion with Harley. Cats brushing up against Harley’s leg.
Catwoman: Do you want to hear a funny story? I once had to watch a weed for Ivy while she visited the rain forest and I completely forgot to water it. When Ivy came home she was so mad at me she kicked me out my own apartment. Hasn’t talked to me since.
Harley: Aw that’s nice but I’m not really here to talk about Ivy. I need help Selina.
7 – Similar to panel 6. Harley kicking away the cat.
Catwoman: My help?
Harley: Only if ya wouldn’t mind. I’ve lost my Bud and Lou.
8 – Catwoman playing with one of her cats. Harley looking shocked.
Catwoman: Those dog-like things? Last time I saw one they were terrorising this little cat right here. I had to intervene.
Harley: What did you do?
9 – Catwoman pointing to the door with her sharp claws.
Catwoman: Not as much as I wanted to do, I knew they were your pets. I just put them right outside the door.
10 – Harley pulling at her pompoms.
Harley: They’re not allowed to be out and about in Gotham on their own. No wonder they got taken! I don’t need your help anymore, Catwoman. You’ve done enough damage!
11 – Harley leaving.
Catwoman: Wait! I need to ask you something before you leave. Are you going to Bruce Wayne’s masked charity ball next week?  *Coming up next issue!
Harley: Wouldn’t miss it for the world!

 
Pages 7-8  
Harley is continuing her journey for help and bumps into Scarecrow.
1 - Harley passing through a cornfield which is right next to Catwoman’s purple mansion.
Harley in thought: My two best pals in the whole wide world both couldn’t help me find my little ones. What is a girl to do now?
2 – Scarecrow is like a traditional scarecrow. Tied up to scare away birds. Startles Harley as she passes by who then falls over.
Scarecrow: Boo!
Harley: Ahh!
3 – Harley Quinn getting up from her fall.
Harley: Professor Crane? Is that you?
Scarecrow: Yes, I am the one and only Scarecrow! What brings you to my corn field?
4 – Harley dusting herself off.
Harley: You’ve got your own cornfield in Gotham? Shouldn’t ya have just moved to Smallville or somthin’?
Scarecrow: No my dear, Smallville is far too dangerous. Too many Superman sightings. What brings you here today?
5 – Harley looking up at Scarecrow sadly. Big puppy eyes.
Harley: I’ve lost my hyenas and I can’t find them anywhere.
6 – Harley showing Scarecrow a photo of Harley hugging her hyenas (similar to HQ #9 variant).
Harley: Look how happy we were together.
SFX: Cries.
7 – Scarecrow looking down at Harley.
Scarecrow: I think I might have seen your hyenas pass through here not too long ago. They were with someone though.
Harley: Who?
8 – Harley pleased that Scarecrow knows some information.
Scarecrow: I am not sure. I think I saw them head in the same direction as Penguin’s Iceberg Lounge.
Harley: Oh thank you! I will go there straight away!

 

Pages 9-10
Harley is making her way to the Iceberg Lounge but remembers how cold it is there. Stops to buy a coat.
 1 – Harley walking past a street of shops having left the cornfield which can still be seen in the horizon.
Harley in thought: It was nice seeing Scarecrow again. He never seems to be able to make our meet ups. Who knew he was hangin’ out there all along?
 2 – Harley walks past a coat shop and stops to look in window.
Harley in thought: Hmm if a gal is goin’ to the Iceberg Lounge then she best go prepared. Harley’s goin’ shoppin’!
3 – Harley walking around coat racks.
Shop assistant: Are you looking for anything special today, miss?
Harley: I need a coat to keep me warm in the Iceberg Lounge. It’s freezin’ in there!
 4 – Shop assistant showing off a rack.
Shop assistant: Winter coats are found right on this rack.
Harley: Yay!
 5 – Harley trying on a coat that looks exactly like Captain Cold’s coat.
Harley in thought: Too Captain Cold.
6 - Harley trying on a coat that looks like Killer Croc’s skin.
Harley in thought: Eww too Killer Croc.
 7 – Harley throwing loads of coats into a pile.
Harley: Nope! Nah! Eww, gross!
 8 – Shop assistant holding up a coat which is similar to Harley’s classic costume but it’s pink and white instead of red and black. It also has a furry hood and two big front pockets.
Harley looking at the coat with heart shaped eyes!
Shop assistant: How about this coat?
Harley: I’ll take it!

 
Pages 11 - 12
1 – Harley walking up to the Iceberg Lounge in her new coat, hood up. Snow is falling from the skies around the building.
Harley in thought: This place sure is special!
2 – Harley enters the Iceberg Lounge and sees Mr Freeze and the Penguin sitting at a table. Penguins are waddling about.
Mr Freeze: And then I said to him… freeze!
Penguin: Hahahaha!
3 – Harley interrupting.
Harley: Excuse me fellas. I just bumped into our ol’friend Scarecrow and he told me that he saw some creep headin’ towards this place with my hyenas.
Penguin: It’s Harley Quinn! Last month her and her boyfriend tried to rob this place. Attack!
 4 – Harley with arms in air, backing away from table.
Harley: Oh I forgot about that. I’m sorry about that birdman, it was nothin’ personal I swear.
Penguin: Attack! Attack!
5 – Mr Freeze rises from the table aiming his freeze gun at Harley. Harley does a backflip in order to dodge his ice ray.
Harley: This isn’t the kinda welcoming I was expectin’.  
SFX: Pew! Pew!
6 – Harley takes out her mallet and whacks Mr Freeze with it.
Harley: Sorry, Vic!
Mr Freeze: Oww!
7 – Mr Freeze is laying on the ground with cartoon stars hovering around his head. Penguin is up on the table looking angry and Harley is backing away with her mallet.
Penguin: Penguins, attack!
8 – Harley Quinn surrounded by angry penguins.
Harley: Oh great.
9 – Harley looks up at the ice chandelier above her.
Harley in thought: I’ve got one shot at this. Let’s get this right.
10 – Harley Jumps onto chandelier and swings away.
Harley: Weeee!
SFX: Swoosh!
11 – Harley running out the door.
Harley: I’m outta here! Smell ya later!

Pages 13 - 14
Harley is starting to lose hope but crosses paths with the Riddler who helps her out.
1 – Harley sitting down sobbing by a wall.
Harley: It’s no use. I've been all over Gotham and my hyenas aren’t anywhere. I can’t believe my Joker and my babies are all gone.
2 – The Riddler appears.
Riddler: I couldn’t help but overhear you talking to yourself, Harley. Would you like some help?
Harley: Why should I trust you?
3 – Riddler sitting down next to Harley.
Riddler: That is a riddle, isn’t it? Why should anyone trust me?
4 – Riddler facing Harley who is looking down crying.
Riddler: I’ll just sit here in case you decide you need my help.
 5 – Harley looking down at the note that was left.
Harley: I’ve got this note that you can read. It was left at the scene of the crime.
Riddler: Hmm, a coin instructed someone to take your hyenas?
6 – Harley nodding at the Riddler.
Harley: It doesn’t make sense.
Riddler: No, not at first.
7 – Riddler standing up, holding his hand out to Harley.
Riddler: But it does if you really start to think about it. Who do we know who makes every decision through a flip of a coin?
Harley: Two-Face!
 
8 – Riddler and Harley both now standing.
Riddler: Bingo!

9 – Harley and Riddler both in deep thought. Question marks drawn above them.
Harley: Why would Two-Face want my babies though?
Riddler: That is the only mystery that remains. Let’s go found out.
 
10 – Harley looking hopeful once again.
Harley: Ya know where that creep hides out?
Riddler: Of course I do! I make it my business to know where all our friends live. The Two-Face lives where Harvey Dent died, the old election hall.
 

Pages 15-17
Harley and the Riddler go and see Two-Face to try and take back the hyenas. Riddler and Harley recruit Two-Face as a lawyer to help Harley free Joker from Arkham Asylum.
1 – Harley and Riddler outside the abandoned election hall. On the walls are ripped ‘Vote for Harvey Dent’ posters.
Harley: So um, do you want to go in first?
Riddler: Ladies first.
Harley: But as Mr J always says, guys just before.
2 – Harley following the Riddler into a hall that you can tell once looked grand. Two-Face is playing with the two hyenas.
Harley: My babies!
3 – Harley leapfrogging over the Riddler.
Harley: Thanks for ya help, quiz man!
Riddler: It’s Riddler.
4 – Harley running past Two-Face, straight up to the hyenas.
Harley: Mama’s here, sweethearts!
Two-Face: What are you doing here?
Riddler: I think the real question is, why do you have Harley’s hyenas?
5 – Two-Face looking sad.
Two-Face: I was lonely and needed company. I asked the coin what I should do, hire new henchmen or adopt some pets.
6 – Harley grabbing Two-Face by his shirt.
Harley: So you thought you’d just take my babies? Why? Why’da do it?
Riddler: I am also curious to find out.
7 – Harley has let go of Two-Face’s shirt. Two-Face is brushing himself down.
Two-Face: It was the perfect crime. I was stealing two pets from two people. I liked the numbers.
Harley: Yeah, well, how would ya like to be sent back to Arkham ya lousy thief?
8 – Harley and Two-Face both looking at the Riddler.
Riddler: There may be a way we can settle this.
Harley: How?
9 – Riddler close up.
Riddler: It seems to me that Two-Face owes you a favour, Harley. Dent used to be an attorney of law, he should help you legally free the Joker from Arkham Asylum and then we will all part ways. Two-Face won’t end up in any trouble, I would have solved a case and Harley, you can return home with both your pets and your boyfriend.
10 – Two-Face raised hands just by his shoulders. Harley grinning.
Harley: That sounds perfect to me boys!
Two-Face: Oh no, no, no. I don’t do the lawyer thing anymore.
11 – Harley giving evils to Two-Face.
Harley: But you owe me.
Two-Face: I’ll give you back your hyenas and that is it.
12 – Harley whispering in Two-Face ear, Two-Face looking shocked.
Harley: You’re also gonna help me free my angel from Arkham or else *whisper, whisper, whisper*.
13 – All three standing, facing each other.
Two-Face: Fine. I’ll help you free the Joker.
Riddler: I’ll set up the court case.
Harley: Yipee! My family is comin' home!

 
Pages 18 – 20.
The court case where Two-Face manages to get the Joker out of Arkham.
1 – Two-Face standing before a judge as Joker’s lawyer. Joker is there as the defendant.
Judge: The court is now in session. Two-Face, you may begin.
Two-Face: There are many reasons why Joker should have not been jailed last night.
2 – Harley to Riddler who are watching.
Harley: Do ya really think Two-Face can get my puddin’ outta Arkham?
Riddler: Yes, I do.
3 – Back to Two-Face.
Two-Face: The Joker was simply enjoying a night out in town with his girlfriend, Harley Quinn. The only crime that they committed was having too much fun. Nothing was damaged by these two love birds and nobody was hurt.
4 – Two-Face still talking. Joker grinning behind him.
Two-Face: A few cupcakes were thrown but that is not illegal.
5 - Two-Face holding up a newspaper with Batman on the front page.
Two-Face: Also, it was not a police officer who arrested the Joker. The masked vigilante, Batman, brought him to Arkham and he doesn’t really have the power to do that.
6 – Harley yelling out.
Harley: You tell ‘im!
Riddler: Shh, Harley.
7 – Focus on the judge.
Judge: I have made my decision. The Joker is not-guilty and may be released immediately.
8 – Judge’s hammer tapping down.
Judge: Court dismissed.

Pages 20 – 21.
Harley is happy and can finally go home with her puddin’ and the two hyenas.
1 – Outside of the courtroom. Joker has his arm around Harley and they are standing opposite the Riddler and Two-Face. Harley is also holding her hyenas’ leads.
Harley: Well we did it guys.
2 – Harley hugging Riddler.
Harley: Thank you for helping me, question mark man!
Riddler: It’s the Riddler.
3 – Harley punching Two-Face.
Harley: That’s for stealing my babies.
SFX: Punch!
4 – Harley hugging Two-Face.
Harley: But this is for freeing my puddin’.
Two-Face: Let’s not make this a regular meet up.
5 – Harley and Joker getting in Harley’s hammer truck. The hyenas are in the back seat.
Joker: Later losers! Hahahahaha!
6 – Harley driving them home.
Harley: At last, home to our happily ever after.
7 – Harley jumps through red light.
Harley: Oops.
 8 – Batmobile starts to chase the hammer truck.
Harley: Sigh, here we go again.
Joker: Hahahahaha!
The End.
 
Thanks DC Comics for some amazing Harley stories!
You can check out #2 at this link - HQ #2.
 
Let me know what you think about my script in the comments below,
Thanks for reading,
Ellie x
 
 
 
 
 

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